tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post2183496377956093312..comments2012-03-17T15:33:25.039-07:00Comments on Less Poetry, More Stuff.: This Intolerant HopeBP!http://www.blogger.com/profile/02989288225758881596noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-34593999308505346682010-05-07T01:19:06.969-07:002010-05-07T01:19:06.969-07:00I like the tight construction, the passion, and th...I like the tight construction, the passion, and the turn at the end.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-79134948478451720942010-05-05T22:08:13.941-07:002010-05-05T22:08:13.941-07:00Pain, sorrow, hope, & despair.
This all comes ...Pain, sorrow, hope, & despair.<br />This all comes through with your words.<br />Keep writing.Author of Worlds - Brennon ThompSonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16727465620862709906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-33156676951372934252010-05-04T11:17:54.900-07:002010-05-04T11:17:54.900-07:00I like the images in this piece. Good work.I like the images in this piece. Good work.A. Jarrell Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16110961095589774104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-86917794138067787922010-05-04T07:55:45.800-07:002010-05-04T07:55:45.800-07:00“Cause as long as I have you,
I can handle the pro...“Cause as long as I have you,<br />I can handle the profound pain.”<br /><br />When I was in high school that is how I felt about boys. Then I realized that life/love shouldn’t hurt. <br /><br />You are a very talented poet!<br />GerardineAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-89890913281545439652010-05-03T22:07:46.136-07:002010-05-03T22:07:46.136-07:00Wow! This is a WONDERFUL piece! Whew... Seriously....Wow! This is a WONDERFUL piece! Whew... Seriously. It's such a neat thought, to thank of an intangible thing like hope & make it a character. I thought it was really well written and flowed nicely.trevorhoenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12269654143336401370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-79248158451866686972010-05-03T03:36:05.785-07:002010-05-03T03:36:05.785-07:00CONGRATULATIONS, YOUR BLOG HAS BEEN PROMOTED :) PL...CONGRATULATIONS, YOUR BLOG HAS BEEN PROMOTED :) PLEASE PRESS THE RETWEET BUTTON AT THE TOP OF THE POST TO GET YOUR BLOG OUT THERE, VIA TWITTER..<br /><br />http://williamm51.blogspot.com/2010/05/blog-promotions-brenda.htmlwilliam mansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01127816115228181041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-59934343620898174962010-05-03T03:23:54.326-07:002010-05-03T03:23:54.326-07:00heartbreak is awful as you have portrayed very wel...heartbreak is awful as you have portrayed very well here in this poem, life isnt all roses and chocs, but if it is real, u will get over it in time, lovely poem, sad as it is, its real life :)william mansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01127816115228181041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-15001871916286702552010-05-02T23:20:21.609-07:002010-05-02T23:20:21.609-07:00Still deep, and still sad. You know I love and res...Still deep, and still sad. You know I love and respect your talent kiddo, but I might not be the best judge. These days I only pay attention to positive messages. But.....no matter what you write, I will read!!! You always have a fan in me.Shane Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14791528733668296053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-65793801524348706592010-05-01T19:19:00.017-07:002010-05-01T19:19:00.017-07:00I like this one; the way it talks about the human ...I like this one; the way it talks about the human spirit and our love-hate relationship with hope. <br /><br />At the end I would use the whole word "because" rather than "cause", because of the serious message of the poem. I would only use the abbreviation "'cause" if it was the lyrics of a rock song, rather than a poem. That's the only change I would make.pinkyandrexahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07281646977367931687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-55799208345706153472010-04-30T21:52:46.456-07:002010-04-30T21:52:46.456-07:00While I just woke up and don't seem to be feel...While I just woke up and don't seem to be feeling to well currently, I must say this was rather well written with an interesting flow.<br /><br />Now what that means is beyond me but hey, my brain says things and then I repeats'em.Dudelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14143482316501988330noreply@blogger.com