tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post5568666874375735243..comments2012-03-17T15:33:25.039-07:00Comments on Less Poetry, More Stuff.: Every Young Soul FaltersBP!http://www.blogger.com/profile/02989288225758881596noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-49200879315593199582010-04-11T00:00:45.734-07:002010-04-11T00:00:45.734-07:00You are VERY talented, Brenda!!!! But cheer up. Li...You are VERY talented, Brenda!!!! But cheer up. Life is truly what you make it. You have a long beautiful life ahead of you!!! Thanks for sharing with me.Shane Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14791528733668296053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-91079087365488088452010-04-03T16:23:44.438-07:002010-04-03T16:23:44.438-07:00Brenda this was superb, u captured the very essenc...Brenda this was superb, u captured the very essence of life in this poem, no lies, no gimmicks just the truth, please pop over and read some of mine... www.williamm49.blogspot.com<br /><br />well done :)william mansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01127816115228181041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-62528550438039982942010-04-03T15:30:25.772-07:002010-04-03T15:30:25.772-07:00I really love this piece. It's real and raw. N...I really love this piece. It's real and raw. No fabrications.Jai Anthonyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14178133768531022292noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-18638326532919570152010-04-03T00:47:21.367-07:002010-04-03T00:47:21.367-07:00I really like it. and everytime I read it, I find ...I really like it. and everytime I read it, I find that it's exactly my point of view.itsatramhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09611399281729055278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-76143409981667301842010-04-02T16:09:04.893-07:002010-04-02T16:09:04.893-07:00Here's what I see here: This is a kind of loss...Here's what I see here: This is a kind of loss of innocence poem. Friendship bound by money runs stark into an economy driven into the ground. Culture is corrupted. Adults attempt to control. The response is put on armor or to put on hope. And for some reason, I see hope in the very last line -- because even though it's a "I'll show you" line, it also assumes there will be a next time. <br /><br />I liked this.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-72851290743479532172010-04-02T14:42:20.902-07:002010-04-02T14:42:20.902-07:00The great news is there is an up side to the down ...The great news is there is an up side to the down side. Hugs my dear. Nicely done!!!<br />here's an award from moondustwriter http://wp.me/pDORj-rt<br />Enjoy!!!!moondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4492360732547506586.post-18260019250507222642010-04-01T22:04:28.771-07:002010-04-01T22:04:28.771-07:00I like it and love the reality of the piece. Thoug...I like it and love the reality of the piece. Though it's sad 'cause losing vulnerability can be a bad thing for an artist, ya know, lack of trust. I guess the people who truly will matter, we'll be the ones who are able to break the walls down enough, right? Great one Brend!trevorhoenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07564331210498885283noreply@blogger.com