Sunday, February 28, 2010

The Problem With Destiny

I've picked up the pieces of my broken heart
They're tucked away under lock and key
With no sign of ever recovering
But slowly my vitals start to steady
I'm beginning to feel this condition depart
But I've lost the key to my own heart
A reminder of what someone can do
How the love of your life can become someone you knew
So I'll walk this life broken and dull
Until somehow you pull the key
And set my precarious heart free.


  1. This ones super great!!! Great fluency, I appreciate that fact it's not over done, I love the story, love it!

  2. I love the line "I lost the key to my own heart" its very profound and can have a lot of different meanings, leaving lots of room for interpretation… Keep up the good Work! =))