I see a spark in you're smile,
And stars in you're eyes.
I hear a melody in you're voice,
A guiding light in you're words.
I feel a sense of rightness in you're presence,
An electric current in you're touch.
I can smell your sweet scent in your absence,
A lingering reminder of all that you are.
You're simply someone I'd hate to forget,
An open book and a mystery all the same.
You're a stranger and my best friend.
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I love the verse stating I can smell your sweet scent in your absence / A lingering reminder of all that you are. These two lines speak to me. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI love the sweetness and the new memories that are forming
ReplyDeleteI'm RTing my dear
With a few simple words, you say so much.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. :)
You're moving in the direction of someone who is really starting to love life....YES!!!
ReplyDeleteYou have evoked memories... Light glints from a tear falling past a pensive smile. You write beautifully. :) x
ReplyDeleteHi there - Very sweet poem. Quick note - watch your use of "you're." Remember that is you are, so in this poem it should be "your."
ReplyDeletelovely entry. enjoyed the scansion. more!
ReplyDeleteI wish I could write like you do :)
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ReplyDeleteBrenda, you are a very talented writer! I enjoyed reading your poems and look forward to reading more. Keep writing, you have a gift!
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